Sunday, August 18, 2013

In Darkness

Thank you BirdmanRN for the inspiration
also , Thank you to Tali Spencer for the feed back and
insight to make for a better story.....



In the early morning Trey arrived home exhausted after a long night at work wanting only to crawl into bed to sleep , he walks into the dark house knowing his lover would still be sleeping as their work schedules were opposite of each others .

Taking off his clothes as he heads toward the bedroom he removes the last article of clothing before climbing into bed , while his lover still sleeps peacefully he leans over and places a gentle kiss upon his cheek and snuggles down beside him to sleep .

What seems like hours passes as he slowly awakens thinking it is nighttime , he tries to move but realizes he can't , he tries pulling and yanking on the binding but no matter how hard he pulls on them he can't break free , from the darkness he hears the husky voice that he loves so much...
"Try all you want I have you tied tightly to the bed , no amount of yanking and pulling is going to free you only I can set you free you are completely at my mercy and I intend to enjoy this to the very end my love."

Trey realized he was in for something hot , wild and kinky he settled down after a few more half-hearted attempts to free himself ready to submit to anything that his boyfriend dished out to him , knowing he would be pushed to his limits but more than willing to take everything he was given .

Satisfied that he had his full attention , his boyfriend began the slow torture over his hot aching flesh , running his hands over the hard muscles of his legs lightly scraping them with his nails , torturing him into further mind-numbing submission .




















3 comments:

  1. It is a good start!! Keep going.

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  2. Nice! I like the mood you set and the sensual flow of the details.

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  3. On technical stuff I would tweak wordage a bit, and can tell you later how I would redo a couple sentences, but otherwise a great start. You might be stuck because you are now at the point of really showing with words what is happening verses telling with words. Always show, never tell the reader. Good writing is never easy. So what happens next, how are they acting and reacting with each other, what is said, heard, smelled, felt, use the senses. What tools or toys are they playing with... How long will this last if one of them has work in the morning :)

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